Well....

I admire the sense of humour, I really do. But I have to be honest, CF is running out of steam a bit. You can't possibly say that you haven't noticed that.

its so true

its funny how some people feel independant by dressing up like everyone else, and then accusing everyone else to be mainstream. even funnier is that they dont really want to be independant which is where the old 'you should be like me' comes from. its nearly the same as religion!

nicely done. now all you need to do is chavs, emos, and scene people and you have characterised every class of youth that wants to be popular!

buggy as hell

nice idea, shame that it doesn't work - AT ALL. No movement, no digging, no reaction what so ever. Also, random graphic of the dog floating on the menu screen perfectly still in mid air? pretty sure thats not meant to be there.

some serious issues. sort them!

hehe

chaaaaiiiiiiiinnnnnnssssssss fritz! It might have been a long time ago, but if he hadn't returned to redbar a few years ago I think I'd have given up on it by now. great stuff!

I'm not trying to be harsh

This piece would be excellent if there was a greater variation in tone. Whilst art is subjective, and that you can make anything you want to - you have be be careful to not make the work too plain, so here is some things you might want to try:

1) Scan your work. These photos are pretty poor and any decency or tailorship in the work is lost because of the resolution. Scanning will greatly improve how this work looks
2) Shading. Whilst I understand it isn't easy to learn, the only way to get better with artistic methods is to practice. So just say 'hell with it', and shade it. You might destroy it, but you might make it better! One piece of advice, don't be afraid to really press hard whilst shading. When pencilling I normally break quite a few leads. It ensures depth of tone.

Hope that helps. but its real important that you try to make your pictures deeper!